Part 1I Found His Murder Plan Online
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The house was completely dark when I finally pulled into the driveway. Exhaustion hummed in my bones after another late night at the firm. I killed the engine, leaning my head back against the leather seat, and mindlessly unlocked my phone. It was a habit—letting the blue light numb my brain before I had to step inside and be a wife and a mother.
I opened a popular anonymous forum, scrolling past the usual complaints. But one post stopped my thumb dead. The title was bold, demanding, and strange:
How do I force my wife to give me a boy?
The original poster explained his situation. He was a guy from a deeply traditional, rural family who had married into serious wealth. His wife was an only child, a city girl. Her parents had bought them their house, their cars, and essentially funded their entire life. They already had a daughter, but the wife was adamantly one-and-done. The poster was seething. He felt like he was suffocating, stripped of his manhood, desperate for a male heir to carry on his family name.
The comments section was a war zone. Most people were tearing him apart, calling him a gold-digger with a fragile ego.
But as I scrolled further down, the tone shifted. He had found his echo chamber. A few users were agreeing with him, offering sickening advice.
One comment stood out. It made the breath catch in my throat:
“It’s not that complicated, man. Just slip something into your daughter's food. Damage the hardware. If the first draft is ruined, she’ll naturally want to start over with a fresh slate. DM me if you want to know what to use. It’s untraceable.”
A hard shudder ripped through me. The sheer, calculated malice of it turned my stomach. What kind of monster could look at his own flesh and blood and see only a disposable obstacle?
I locked my phone, pushing the darkness of the internet away, and walked up to the front door.
The moment my key turned in the lock, the door was yanked open from the inside. David stood there, his face completely bloodless, eyes wide with panic.
"Nina!" he choked out, grabbing my shoulders. "It’s Sophie. She’s burning up. Her fever is over a hundred and four!"
I shoved past him, my heart hammering against my ribs, and sprinted up the stairs.
Sophie lay in her bed, her tiny face flushed a mottled, angry crimson. She was limp.
"She was perfectly fine when I put her to sleep!" David was right behind me, his voice cracking. "I just went in to check if she’d kicked her blankets off, and when I touched her..."
The words from that anonymous post flashed like neon in my brain. Damage the hardware. Untraceable.
I drew in a sharp, jagged breath, forcefully shoving the terror down into the darkest pit of my stomach.
"Get the keys," I ordered. "We are going to the ER. Now."
The drive to the hospital felt like swimming through wet concrete. David was driving ten miles below the speed limit, his hands gripping the steering wheel so tight his knuckles were white.
"Step on it, David!" I snapped, my voice shrill in the quiet car.
Those sickening words from the internet kept clawing their way back up my throat. I sat up perfectly straight, my chest tight.
No. Stop it.
It was impossible. David worshiped me. He adored Sophie. Every single day, the very first thing he did when he walked through the door was scoop his daughter up and spin her around. When she went through her sleep regression, he was the one walking the halls at 3:00 AM, humming her back to sleep.
We made it to the ER. They took her back immediately.
Hours later, the attending doctor pulled us into a sterile, windowless family room. The look on his face made the floor drop out from under me.
"The situation is extremely critical," he said, pulling off his surgical cap. His voice was too gentle. "Her fever spiked to dangerous levels, causing severe neurological stress. Even if we stabilize her... you need to be prepared. There is a very high likelihood of permanent, severe cognitive damage."
My knees gave out. I would have hit the linoleum if David hadn’t caught me. His arms wrapped around me, pulling me against his chest. He was trembling.
That night, they transferred our three-year-old daughter to the Pediatric Intensive Care Unit.
I stood outside the glass wall, pressing my hand against the cold pane. Sophie was so small. She was practically swallowed by the hospital bed, an angry web of tubes and wires snaking out from her tiny body. Every beep of the heart monitor was a blade twisting in my gut.
David sat in the plastic chair beside me, staring at his hands.
"Nina," he whispered, his voice thick with tears. "The doctor said... even if they bring her back, she won't be our Sophie anymore. She might never be able to think for herself."
I didn't answer. The tears were coming too fast, hot and silent down my cheeks.
He turned his head to look at me. His eyes were red-rimmed and bloodshot.
"I was thinking..." he swallowed hard. "Maybe we should let her go. Stop the treatment."
I whipped my head around, staring at him as if he were a stranger. "What did you just say? You want our daughter to die?"
"I don't want her to die!" he cried out, a defensive edge cutting through his grief. "I want her to have peace! I don't want her to spend the rest of her life suffering like a vegetable, trapped in her own body!"
I looked at my husband. Somewhere deep inside the foundation of my reality, a hairline fracture appeared.
He reached out, covering my cold hand with his warm one. His thumb stroked my knuckles.
"I will be right here with you, Nina. Every step of the way," he murmured, his voice dropping into that soothing, familiar cadence. "Once we... once we take care of her arrangements, we can... we can just try again. Have another baby."