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Part 3The Redemption Rewrite

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"Did you find out my baby is sick and decide to get sick too to win me back?"

The Sugar Baby hid behind Damien, acting coy. "Yesterday Damien was too rough, I couldn't handle the pain so I came to the hospital."

"Sister, don't copy me, okay?"

Chloe rolled her eyes and tried to walk around them, but he grabbed her.

"Apologize to her!"

"For what?" Chloe screeched, like a cat with its tail stepped on.

"Get it straight, she hit me first!" She tried to reason with him.

Damien was arrogant. "You've enjoyed the title of Mrs. White in her place long enough. So what if she slapped you a few times?"

As soon as he finished speaking, Chloe turned red.

The next second, she slapped the Sugar Baby and kicked Damien!

"You're both animals! Don't pretend to be human!"

Damien stood between them to protect the Sugar Baby and shoved Chloe.

Chloe tumbled down the stairs.

Blood spread across the floor from under her dress. I screamed as I ran to her, "Doctor! Doctor! Help! She's miscarrying!"

"She's pregnant?" Damien asked.

The Sugar Baby panicked. "Impossible! Sister hit me so hard, she must be faking it."

"Let's go, my tummy hurts."

She dragged Damien away. I didn't have time to think, I rushed to the ER.

The doctor told me the baby was gone, and multi-organ failure from cancer meant she could only be kept alive by machines. It would be painful.

This was the System's custom death scenario.

I relaxed a bit, thinking the System had a pain blocker.

But then I saw her curled up, sweating profusely, biting her lip until it bled.

"System! What's happening?" I yelled in panic.

The System's voice crackled, barely alive.

"Host... she transferred all her pain blocking points to you."

"So right now, she feels the same pain as a real cancer patient."

My eyes burned. "Chloe, are you plotting against me?"

Chloe weakly lifted her hand to pat my head. "I'm dying. What if they bully you when I'm gone?"

"Leaving you a bit extra is always good."

I was touched to tears, but then she added, "I'm not losing out. You gave me your reward points."

"I die first, I enjoy first."

Fine! She has a conscience, but not much.

I went to find a doctor, hoping to ease her pain.

But the top specialist had been summoned by Damien.

I called him. "Damien, send the doctor back. Chloe has cancer, she's in agony."

He scoffed. "Chloe is as healthy as a horse. She took a knife for me and was jumping around the next day. Now she's dying because I haven't seen her for a few days? Who are you kidding?"

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